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Name: Toni Surudoi

Alias: Unpredictable Lightning

Age: 18 years

Gender: Male

Species: Mobian

Breed: Hedgehog

Relationship: Taken by Tri (From :icontacticoolmofo: )

Mature Status: Straight 

Status: Alive

Occupation: Leader of Team Tri-Elemental 

Date of birth: 14th October

Family

  • Arsol (Father): Toni did not know that he really had a father until he started to heard his name after some certain people were a little surprise that he had the same surname as him. Toni does not really know how he is exactly, not even the swordsman's physical appearance.
  • Sophia (Mother): Toni really loved her mother, as he broke to tears as his mother decided to sacrifice for her kids. Toni learned the Rakurai-ha technique after seeing one lost video of her mother, when she was a street fighter in the past, before meeting Arsol.
  • Dani (Foster older brother): Although they were not brothers by blood, they were raised together and act as if they were. It was thanks to him that Toni was able to surpass the trauma of her mother's death at first, and took care of him until tragedy happened again, although he made Toni promise to him, giving him his usual coat, that he must going on living, even if things were darker, making this the reason why Toni treasures this coat so much.

Personality: In any normal situation, he would be described as an easy-going and cheerful fellow, but there is more than that. He is extremely loyal to his friends and he is someone that treats everyone equally, because of what happened on his past: no matter how they are or were, the powers that they have, etc, although he often unintentionally shows somewhat of a disrespect towards people of higher authority than himself upon meeting them, but even so, he can show respect for things that a person is willing to die for, to the point of even fighting to protect that which the person would throw their lives away over. Knowing the pain of being rejected, and losing everything that he cared about in his past, he understands very well people that has the same pain and also the meaning of not knowing a purpose. Because of his loyalty to his friends, he can lose his temper if they are harmed in any way and is willing to do drastic things to avenge and defend those dear to him, even if it means breaking a promise to his friends.

Additionally, he believes that all people should be loyal to their friends, and if he sees anyone betraying their own comrades, he would stand up for the victims (even if they are enemies), and that giving the reputation for being extremely reckless, and in some cases, insane, but unlike someone psychotic, his comes from him trying to help or save others, especially in the face of authority. He doesn't consider himself a hero, because he thinks that he is just doing what he thinks is right. Toni has also a liking for adventure and knowing the world that he had not the chance to explore before.

Even though his recklessness, and sometimes, liking to fighting (like a sparring), he generally refuses to fight someone that he does not personally consider an enemy, preferring to either talk it over or run away from the confrontation. It's need to add, that even if he likes fighting, he merely enjoys when it comes to competitions, as for example, tournaments, or friendly sparrings, even if some had said that Toni has a fighter/warrior spirit.

Another dominant trait humble nature: he does not brag about the powerful foes he's defeated in the past, he admits that there were enemies and situations that were really hard for him and that almost got him killed, and the way that made him what he is now was not a walk on the park, adding as well that he is quite honest, not really having a problem what he has in his mind, but he could be a bit blunt when he says it.

Transformations:

Super Toni: Like many Super Form, Toni's fur turn orange-yellow, his eyes turn red, and his quills change quite as well compare to his normal self, and his lightning marks turns more light-yellow. toni987.deviantart.com/art/Sup…
He needs the 7 Chaos Emeralds to reach it and it has the general abilities that brings the Super Form:

  • Flight: The ability to take flight thanks to the energy given by the Emeralds
  • Enhanced physical abilities: With the Super Form, Toni’s physical abilities increased dramatically, although his average speed cannot still be compared to Super Sonic’s, only getting close when he coats himself with lighting
  • Invulnerability: As with any Super Form, Toni does not take damage while he is in that form, although it’s not absolute, as depending on the enemy, it can bypass this invulnerability.
  • Enhanced lightning powers: Aside from his physical abilities, the form also enhances Toni’s lighting powers further, making even the simple Electro into a powerful lightning strike
  • Access to Chaos Energy: As the form is obtained by the Chaos Emeralds, Toni has access to the Chaos Energy, however, he rarely uses these powers unless absolutely necessary since he prefers to use his lightning combat style than that, and besides, he has better control with lightning that chaos energy. 
  • He can only stay transformed for some time as the form is not permanent, as a Super Form itself consumes tremendous amounts of energy given by the Emeralds.

Skills:

Lightning Immunity: As his body, in a way, is lightning, lightning attacks doesn't make much damage to Toni, and even stranger, he can ''eat'' lightning, as if it was a meal, to replenish his energy reserves.

Immense Stamina and Endurance: One things that has inherit from his father is his high stamina, and he is able to fight for long times, and be able to do moves that have some risk, but be able to keep fighting.

Fighting Instincts and Reflexes: As having one of the best in terms of swordsmanship as a father and also a experienced fighter as a mother, Toni had quite like the instincts and good reflexes to fight, even before his training started.

Expert Hand to Hand Combatant:
 His fighting style is not based in any martial art, it consists of adept hand-to-hand combat, supplemented with his physical prowess and lightning abilities, being highly adept at improvising.

Powers: His powers is basically control lightning, but it's kinda different from other people that controls lightning as electrokinesis , since the lightning that comes out of his body is stored and created inside his body. He can surround himself by lightning and have some traits typical of real lightning: he's shown capable of freely moving around at high speed and to travel over long distances, as well as to electrocute everything crossing his path with the voltage of his bodily electricity being high, and he can use his lightning in combination with punches, kicks, and even headbutts, to combat his opponents to great effect. He can't shoot lightning or lightning techniques, at least that he says some words or spells, or concentrating in one point. This is due to the fact that Toni comes from a clan of Mobians that could maniplate electricity, and use mainly spells as the main use of that manipulation.

*Spells:

Electro: Shoots an sporadic bolt of lightning.

Rashirudo: Creates a strong front shield composed of two pillars connected with a wall of electricity that have in the center of the wall a thunderbolt with a sphere. When is used, it absorbs the attacks and shoots them back at the opponent with an added kick of electricity.

Fukusu Electro: Summons cylinders with lightning bolts on them in a circular formation, which rapidly shoot bullet-shaped blasts of electricity. The cylinders are manipulated and used with how Toni positions his fingers.

TeoElectro: Shoots a more powerful and more wide-ranged Electro.

*Other kind of attacks:

Rakurai-ha: Toni’s signature technique. The technique consists on putting the fingers of both hands together against each hand as he started to accumulated on the top of his fingers as he would started to separated them and a ball of electricity would appear because of the electricity accumulated.

He would then put that ball between his palms as he would put his arms to the side of his body, as he added a little more of electricity to the ball as he would then thrust the hands, pointing them to his opponent as from the ball would come out a concentrated lightning beam.

Denruiken: Technique that Toni develop on his journey after thinking if he fought someone that it is stronger than him. It involves him speeding up the production of lightning inside his body, which would make his techniques more powerful, as it also affects the rest of his body as the electricity stimulates his locomotor system as it could be noticed that his fur changed colors to a blue azure due to what is happening inside his body, as his lightning marks turn dark blue.

The technique would start by Toni surrounding his hand with electricity and would put that hand on his chest, where his heart would be nearby, as then electricity would come out his body surrounding him, as his electricity would change to a blue-white color. The electricity would then be controlled and fade away as the technique process is finished.

Thanks to this technique, Toni can go all out as his physical and lighting abilities are improved as he thinks of this as a way to fight with all he had, although this not arrive to the powering up of the Super Form.
To fully understand this technique, imagine if Toni's heart was a machine, and what Toni does when he touches his chest is actually sending a shock to the'machine', making a temporary alteration in how the machine works, making it to work faster and produce more lightning.

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 Exploding Lightning: Toni charges forward and punches/ kicks his opponent with a lightning imbued fist/kick, but unlike a normal lightning imbued fist/kick, this releases a large amount of lightning upon impacting with the intended target, heavily damaging and electrocuting the target, whilst also pushing them away with great force.

Limitations and weaknesses:

  • Exploding Lightning leaves the member that used the technique quite numb, so it’s not something that can be used repeatedly in some seconds.
  • The Denruiken has the defect that if it is used multiple times or its use is prolonged, the increased power begins to diminish and fatigue increases as well, and in some extreme cases, the body would stop responding temporarily when the technique is off and even Toni would split some blood from his mouth. This technique cannot be used alongside with any of his transformations, because the pressure and strain of the technique would kill him.
  • Although Toni has a high durability, this can be used against himself as Toni can overexert himself too much.  
  • As can be seen from the first, Toni techniques need energy and is not infinite. Depending on the level of power, a technique spend more or less. A simple comparison would be the Electro and Rakurai-ha: Electro, being its weakest attack, obviously spend far less energy than Rakurai-ha, that it's a concentration of electricity. To recover this energy, Toni needs to rest and eat, the time needed depends on the energy that has been used.
  • To reach his transformations, things or requirements are needed, they are not "free".
  • The Rashirudo is a front shield that only protects against oncoming attacks, therefore, it cannot be used against drone attacks, or attacks that travels in the underground, etc. Although he can increase its defensive power with Zasekisai, there is no perfect shield so it can be broken, adding the necessary pressure.
  • Toni's lightning still follows the laws of physics (for once, Sonic fandom XD), so it can be attracted by materials such as lightning rods or that are conductive, or not reach his opponent because in the middle there is an insulator that does not let electricity advance.
  • Toni's immunity only happens with lightning, so if you attack him with lightning that is combined with another element, he cannot absorb it and he would receive damage. Another thing is that Toni cannot eat lightning which is produced by himself, so if you return the electrical attack, he cannot eat, because it was he who produced the lightning. In addition, Toni has a limit on the amount of lightning that he can eat, and if for a moment he is overloaded, then he needs to release all that energy accumulated.
  • He can lose in a fight, and as you know, there will always be someone better than you, no matter how good you are in one thing or another.
  • Even if he is my main character, that does not mean that he is my strongest character, like for example, his father Arsol is stronger than him.
  • About the spells, he needs to say it loud, so if someone had fought him, that person has experience of his lightning spells, so he/she could be able to predict slightly what spell is he going to say next.

Backstory: Toni actually had quite a normal life in his childhood, since in the place that he lived, his father’s reputation did not affect him, and her mother work as a professional fighter. He lived happily with his foster big brother and his mother, until some accident happened in the school that he was going: a number of muggers entered in the school to use the people in as hostages, and obtain money for themselves from the government. Toni was terrified and crying as well, although this would turn against him, as one of the muggers wanted to shut off that sound with a bullet. As Toni would watch away from the end, the sound of a pistol could be heard, although he did not feel anything on his body, but the image that he had in front of him was not a pleasant one: the sight of his brother Dani, in front of him, having the bullet piercing his abdomen, and then falling to his knees, grunting with pain, as the other tried to put him out of his misery. Toni would watch how he point his pistol at his brother again, and changing that fear and sadness to anger, he would shout them to stop it as from his body would come out electricity that would attack the mugger, striking him hard and sending him to a wall, almost killing him. This would shock everyone, both victims and muggers, although this shock would be the end of those muggers, as the police arrived in that very moment, and arrest every mugger, as Dani was sent to the hospital.

After that day, many things would make Toni confused: what was that power that he had unleashed? Why it did come out? Why he have it? He had those answers as his mother get the information of what happened in school, she had those lightning powers as well. Toni did not know what to think of it, although he was glad that his brother would come out alive, but after that incident, things would get a little bad for the hedgehog. At school, some were afraid of him due to what happened the other day, adding the fact that the place where he live, having powers was not a very usual thing to see, and after seeing that he almost killed someone with his powers uncontrolled. Then those acts of bullying would start, and even though his brother defended him, he started to be afraid of his own powers. Even though that fear would be reduced somehow by the words of his brother and mother, there was still fear inside him, and would affect him in the usage of his power.

What happened afterwards? That’s something that I know, and you guys may find out someday soon.

Extra information:

*Toni's username comes from his father, and means
 cutting 
*Toni's coat at first belonged to his brother, but he gave to him before the last time that he had seen him, so he considers that coat like a treasure.
*Toni likes to drink soda.
*The gi was a gift from Kosen itself and he is able to wear it with just a thought, although he only uses it in formal things or when he think that he is going to have an important fight: toni987.deviantart.com/art/Ton…


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I decided to complete more the bio, as well as adding some more details that were not on the previous one :)
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